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2011-12-06

 

作者简介:杨若青  新概念二学员   泰达二小五年级学生

杨若青小朋友的作文一直在文章的立意方面比较新颖,让老师有一种特别想多多阅读她的文章的想法,可惜文章并不多啊!文章中有点小错误已经被更正,希望可以回去对照,现在完成时的句法结构一定要记得清楚一些:

主语+ have/has+(already,never,ever….)+过去分词+其他…

 

An exciting trip

I have just received a letter from my friend, Ann. She is in Chinanow. She has been there for five months. Ann is an air hostess. She is working in a big air firm and she has already visited the Great Wall. She thought: Chinais very beautiful! She has just bought a set of china for her parents. She will soon go home. Ann has never been abroad before, so she is finding this trip very exciting. 

 

On holiday

Dear grandmother:

I’m writing from our hotel at Rome. Father and Mother are on holiday with me for a few days. We’re happy to be here. We have many good times.

Today is a very nice day. Look! The sun is shining, and the birds are singing. What a beautiful day!

I’m very happy. Right now, I’m in the park. I’m running and doing gymnastics. My father and mother are happy, too. They’re watching TV now.

The restaurants here are so cheap, and the food is so yummy. And, we all are healthy.

All the other hotels here are ugly and so old. Our hotel is very new and beautiful, and it has a yard.

So, grandmother, we’re happy to be here on holiday.

See you soon.

Love,

Angel

 

 

Summer writing

The writer went to the theatre last week. He didn’t enjoy the play. A Young man and a young woman were sitting behind him. They were talking loudly. The writer couldn’t hear the actors. He turned round; he said that “he couldn’t hear a word.” But, the young man said that this was a private conversation!  

 

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